Red Kite Premium Announcement

The Red Kite team knows that financial aid delays have made the college process in 2024 more stressful than ever. To provide support during this challenging year, we are offering Red Kite Premium to everyone at no charge through the end of 2024.

Red Kite Premium provides more resources for your scholarship search, including (but not limited to):

·        Enhanced search capabilities

·        Advanced notice of new scholarships

·        Alerts about “Easy” and “No Essay” scholarships

·        Early notifications for approaching deadlines

If you sign up for Red Kite – or if you already have an existing Red Kite account – you will be able to use Red Kite Premium until December 31, 2024.

There’s no two ways to put it: this was an extremely difficult year for families seeking financial aid. Red Kite is here to help, and we want to give you just one more tool to find money for college.

To better understand the benefits of Red Kite Premium, please see below:

https://myredkite.com/

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Why You Should List Your Scholarship on Red Kite

Red Kite’s main goal is to help financially support college students. We created www.myredkite.com to make finding scholarships easier and more accessible.

And for scholarship providers, we wanted to foster a unique opportunity to reach a vast pool of applicants. Millions of financial aid dollars go unused every year, simply because nobody applies for them.

Our Red Kite Matching Engine connects students to scholarship opportunities specific to their background, interests, and preferences. Personalizing scholarships makes lesser-known opportunities more visible, a win-win scenario for both students and providers.

Here’s why listing your scholarship(s) on Red Kite could be the best decision you make this year:

  1. Access to a Targeted Audience

Red Kite is dedicated exclusively to financial aid opportunities. Our site is ad-free and without bloat: there’s no need for a bunch of extra features.

And when you list your scholarships on our platform, you’re not just posting to a general audience – you’re reaching a highly targeted group of students who are actively seeking for financial support.

This targeted exposure not only increases the visibility of your scholarships but also significantly enhances the chances of attracting qualified applicants who are truly aligned with your criteria. Red Kite helps bridge the gap between your scholarship opportunities and the students who need them most.

 

  1. Streamlined Application Process

At Red Kite, we understand that the scholarship application process can be overwhelming for students. That’s why we’ve designed our platform to be a one-stop hub that aggregates over $25 BILLION in financial aid, making it easier than ever for students to find and apply to the ones that best fit their needs.

By consolidating scholarship listings into a single place, we eliminate the need for students to hop between multiple websites and databases. This streamlined process allows students to focus less on searching and more on applying, which can lead to a higher volume of applications for your scholarships.

But we don’t stop at just listing opportunities. We guide students through the entire application journey, ensuring they don’t miss any critical steps or deadlines. From the moment they find a scholarship to the final submission of their application, Red Kite is there every step of the way.

By offering tools to track deadlines, manage submissions, and stay organized, we help students maintain a clear path toward their financial aid goals—all in one place.

This comprehensive approach not only benefits students but also increases the likelihood that your scholarships will attract well-prepared applicants who have the support they need to successfully complete the process.

  1. Enhanced Visibility and Credibility

In today’s digital age, visibility and credibility are paramount when it comes to attracting the right applicants for your scholarships. Listing your scholarships on Red Kite provides a unique opportunity to amplify both.

Our students recognize Red Kite as a trusted, reliable source for financial aid. We’ve built our platform on a foundation of integrity, transparency, and a commitment to helping students find the best opportunities to fund their education.

Students are more likely to apply to opportunities they find on a platform they believe in, knowing that the listings are vetted and genuine. This can result in a higher quality of applications, as students who are serious about their educational pursuits and financial needs will be more inclined to engage with your offerings.

When you choose to list your scholarships with us, you’re not just increasing your visibility—you’re aligning your organization with a brand that students already trust.

 

4. Cost-Effective Marketing

Marketing your scholarships effectively is essential to attracting the right applicants, but traditional marketing methods can often be both expensive and time-consuming. At Red Kite, we offer a cost-effective alternative that allows you to reach a highly targeted audience without the need for costly ad campaigns.

As mentioned, our targeted exposure eliminates the guesswork and inefficiencies often associated with broader marketing strategies. This not only maximizes the impact of your budget but also increases the likelihood of attracting qualified applicants.

Furthermore, our platform handles the heavy lifting of promoting your scholarships, allowing you to focus on other important aspects of your program.

With Red Kite, you can achieve the reach and visibility you need without stretching your resources thin, making it a smart, cost-effective solution for marketing your scholarships to the right audience.

  1. Support for a Diverse Pool of Applicants

At Red Kite, we believe that every student, regardless of their background, should have access to the financial support they need to pursue their education. Our commitment to diversity and inclusion is part of our personalization feature, ensuring that scholarships reach students from all walks of life.

Our platform is designed to be inclusive to students from underrepresented groups who may not have the same access to traditional scholarship search methods.

By making your scholarships available on Red Kite, you help bridge the gap for these students, offering them a fair chance to compete for the financial aid they deserve.

Red Kite’s extensive reach ensures that your scholarships are seen by a diverse pool of applicants, including those who might otherwise be overlooked by conventional channels. This not only broadens the impact of your scholarship programs but also aligns your organization with values of equity and inclusion.

By supporting students from various backgrounds, you are helping to create a more diverse and inclusive academic community.

Your support helps empower students from all backgrounds to pursue their dreams, enriching both their lives and the broader academic landscape.

The cost of education continues to soar, and scholarships have never been more essential. They are the lifeline that enables countless students to pursue their academic dreams without the burden of overwhelming debt.

As a scholarship provider, you play a vital role in this process, and by partnering with Red Kite, you can amplify your impact in a meaningful way.

Listing your scholarships on Red Kite is more than just expanding your reach—it’s about making a tangible difference in the lives of students who need it the most. Our platform connects your opportunities with a diverse and motivated pool of applicants.

Through Red Kite, you can ensure that your support reaches students who might otherwise be excluded due to financial barriers, helping them achieve their academic and career aspirations.

But it’s not just about reach – it’s about impact. By choosing Red Kite, you join us in our mission to make education more accessible and equitable for all. Together, we can create pathways to success for students from all walks of life, giving them the financial support they need to focus on what really matters: their education and future.

So why wait? Take the next step in maximizing your scholarship program’s potential. List your scholarships on Red Kite today, and be part of a community dedicated to making a real difference in the world of education. Let’s work together to ensure that every deserving student has the opportunity to achieve their academic goals.

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The Ultimate Scholarship Playlist: Songs to Motivate your Application

With the fall semester fast approaching, there’s still time to apply for scholarships!

Scholarship season is all year, y’all. Whether you’re a high school senior, a college student, or a grad school hopeful, there’s a ton of great financial aid opportunities waiting for you year round.

And let’s be real—finding the perfect scholarship can feel overwhelming. That’s where Red Kite comes in. Our platform is designed to help you personalize your financial aid search, making the process easier and more efficient.

So, if you’re still on the hunt for that ideal scholarship, be sure to sign up with Red Kite today and let us help you navigate your options!

Personally, there’s nothing that motivates me like good music. While applying to scholarships, you’ll have to tackle essays, recommendation letters, endless forms… I know that I never would’ve made it through without Beyoncé.

A good playlist sets the vibe, giving you the energy and focus you need to power through. Of course, everybody’s taste is different, which is why I’ve curated a list of songs across multiple genres.

I wanted to stick with the motivational theme, or else just high-energy songs to pump you up. Here’s a link to the full playlist on Spotify! (The clean version, of course…)

Whether you’re into pop, rock, hip-hop, or something more mellow, ya girl Jane has got you covered. Grab your headphones and let’s get to work!

Table of Contents:

Rock

Pop

R&B

Country

Hip-hop/Rap

K-pop

Music of Latin America

 

 

Rock

The song: The Beatles – “Hey Jude”

The reason: This one’s a classic, of course, but “Hey Jude” was also written for a very special reason. Paul McCartney wrote it to comfort his bandmate John Lennon’s young son during a stressful time. So if you’re feeling the pressures of applying to financial aid, remember the golden line: “Don’t carry the world upon your shoulders.”

If “Hey Jude” was a scholarship, I’d probably classify it as need-based. We all need a little help sometimes, and need-based scholarships help underprivileged students achieve their dreams!

The runner-ups:

  • Led Zeppelin – “Stairway to Heaven”
  • Elvis Presley – “Jailhouse Rock”
  • Rush – “Tom Sawyer”

 

Pop

The song: Beyoncé – “BREAK MY SOUL”

The reason: You knew this was coming. There are so many pop icons to choose from, but of course, our queen Bey is proficient across every genre (which is why she shows up on this list so often). If she was a type of scholarship, she’d be a “No Essay” scholarship – one that’s open to everyone!

(P.S. – with Red Kite Premium, you now have access to a curated list of active “No Essay” scholarships!)

And if, like me, you were also raised on Miley Cyrus and Rihanna, you know that pop music gets you grooving. Let’s not forget the greats: Madonna, The Weeknd, Bruno Mars, Billie Eilish, Ed Sheeran, and Michael Jackson, to name a few. But if I had to pick just one song for your scholarship search, you can’t go wrong with music royalty.

“BREAK MY SOUL” has that classic beat that just makes me want to jump out of my cubicle and dance. I’ll be applying to graduate school soon, and this song has been getting me through the brainstorming process. It’s all about persevering through struggle!

The runner-ups:

  • Katy Perry – “Roar”
  • Lady Gaga – “The Edge of Glory”
  • Justin Bieber – “All in It”

 

R&B

The song: Alicia Keys – Underdog

The reason: I know the “blues” half of “rhythm and blues” doesn’t exactly scream “motivational.” But you’d be surprised at the wealth of positive, uplifting R&B songs that can accompany your scholarship journey!

If R&B was a scholarship, it’d be targeted at artsy, creative kids who balance their go-with-the-flow personality with their unique talents. That’s why I chose Alicia Keys, another brilliant artist who defies genres. Remember, don’t be afraid to take risks, because standing out of the crowd might just win you a scholarship!

The runner-ups:

  • Jordin Sparks – “One Step at a Time”
  • SZA – “Open Arms (feat. Travis Scott)”
  • Khalid – “Motion”

 

Country

The song: Morgan Wallen – “Cowgirls”

The reason: Morgan Wallen is a country GOAT, and this song never fails to pump me up! I wanted to look beyond all the great motivational country songs – like “I’m a Survivor” by Reba McEntire, for example – and turn my focus to modern country.

“Cowgirls” sets the vibe for the scholarships of the future. I’m picturing all the students interested in AI, robotics, and STEM, among others. The song blends sounds from multiple genres to create a toe-tapping bop that charted for weeks when it first came out.

The runner-ups:

  • Beyoncé – “TEXAS HOLD ‘EM”
  • Chris Stapleton – “Starting Over”
  • Tim McGraw – “I Like It, I Love It”

 

 

Hip-hop/Rap

The song: Lil Wayne – “Good Morning”

The reason: Obviously, the classic “Lose Yourself” by Eminem gets everybody hyped, but I wanted to dig a little deeper. You need all the good vibes you can get while applying to scholarships, which is why I chose the song that I listen to every morning before work!

“Good Morning” helps me start the day on the right foot, which is why it’s for hard-working students applying for early action deadlines. For all my motivated Kitelings who get up and work on their college applications, you might find that this song gives you a little extra boost!

The runner-ups:

  • Mac Miller – “100 Grandkids”
  • JAY-Z, Kanye West – “Murder to Excellence”
  • Kendrick Lamar – “DNA”

 

K-pop

The song: BTS – “IDOL”

The reason: I know, I know, I’m basic. But when I first heard this song a few years ago, not only did it introduce me to the genre of K-pop, I also fell in love with the core message: “I love myself!”

“Idol” goes out to all the students applying for skills-based scholarships. It reminds me of all the dedicated athletes working hard to score financial aid from their favorite colleges. Iconic people need the proper background music to accompany their greatness!

The runner-ups:

  • BLACKPINK – “Shut Down”
  • IVE – 해야 (HEYA)
  • TAEYEON – “Heaven”

 

Music of Latin America

The song: Marc Anthony – “Vivir Mi Vida”

Like with the other genres, I wanted to step out of my comfort zone (Bad Bunny and Rosalía) by asking my Latino boyfriend for his recommendations. I told him I was looking for upbeat, positive songs to help our Kitelings to the finish line.

Most of what he referenced consisted of love songs, which I put as the runner-ups. But “Vivir Mi Vida” is a fantastic call-to-action for dancing your way through all the trials and tribulations of life. The song won a Grammy and made waves as an instant classic.

So, let’s close out this playlist with a song that reminds me of first-generation students! My college roommate was first-gen, and she is by far the hardest-working person I know. “Vivi Mi Vida” is for all the trailblazers looking for scholarship success not only for themselves, but for their families, too!

The runner-ups:

  • Grupo Marca Registrada – “La Guerita”
  • Santa Fe Klan – “Tu y Yo”
  • Chino & Nacho – “Nina Bonita”

 

 

Hopefully, you all found some inspiration for your college journey on this playlist. Scholarships come in many shapes and sizes, just like the diverse genres of music we enjoy. So, as you navigate the world of scholarships, remember to keep an open mind and explore every genre!

The process may seem daunting at times, but by staying open to different opportunities, you’ll discover scholarships that align with your unique goals and passions. With the right mix, you’ll find the perfect track that not only fits your style but also keeps you motivated and focused on your path to success.

Whether it’s a big award that covers all your needs or smaller grants that add up over time, there’s a scholarship out there that can help you turn your college dreams into reality. So keep exploring, stay persistent, and let your scholarship search play on!

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You’ve Won a Scholarship: How to Keep It

For students entering the most competitive college applicant pool of all time, securing financial aid for education is crucial. We created Red Kite to help match our students to scholarships that are specific to their own personality and interests.

Winning a scholarship is a significant achievement, and it can help pave the way to a brighter future. But receiving a scholarship is only half the battle—scholarships often come with specific requirements that you must meet to maintain your award throughout your academic journey.

Let’s explore a few ways to ensure that you’re on track to keeping your scholarship.

1. Understand the Requirements

Before anything else, be sure to thoroughly review the terms and conditions of your scholarship. This can and should be done while initially applying to the scholarship, because any extra requirements will be listed on the application page.

And if you’ve just received notice that you’ve won a scholarship, be sure to double-check the requirements. Refreshing yourself on what is expected of you is of the utmost importance.

Scholarship requirements can vary widely, but some common stipulations include:

  • Maintaining a Minimum GPA: Many scholarships require you to maintain a certain GPA (Grade Point Average) to keep your award. Know what that number is and strive to exceed it.
  • Full-Time Enrollment: Some scholarships are only available to full-time students. Dropping below full-time status could put your scholarship at risk.
  • Participation in Activities: Some scholarships require you to participate in specific extracurricular activities, community service, or internships.

Take note of these requirements and make a plan to meet them consistently.

2. Stay on Top of Your Academics

Academic performance is often the most critical factor in maintaining your scholarship. Here are a few ways to stay on top of your courses:

Attend Classes Regularly

Your presence in class is crucial, not just for understanding the material but also for your overall grade.

Missing classes can lead to lower test scores and even the risk of losing your scholarship. Make it a nonnegotiable habit to attend every class, participate actively, and stay engaged with the course content.

Seek Help

Don’t wait until you’re overwhelmed to ask for help. If you find yourself struggling with a subject or falling behind, you should reach out for support immediately.

Whether it’s scheduling office hours with your professor, joining a study group, or seeking a tutor, early intervention can prevent small challenges from turning into bigger problems.

Time Management

Balancing your academic workload with extracurricular activities and social commitments can be a juggling act. Effective time management is key to maintaining high grades without burning out.

Start by organizing your schedule, setting priorities, and using tools like planners or digital apps to keep track of assignments and deadlines. Make sure to allocate enough time for studying, and don’t forget to include breaks to recharge.

Stay Organized

Keeping your notes, assignments, and study materials well-organized can significantly reduce stress and help you stay on top of your coursework.

Develop a system that works for you, whether it’s folders, binders, or notebooks (digital or physical). Regularly review and update your materials to ensure you’re always prepared for exams and assignments.

Set Realistic Goals

Setting academic goals can provide motivation and direction, but it’s important to keep them realistic.

Break down your larger goals into smaller, manageable tasks, and track your progress regularly. Celebrate small victories along the way, and adjust your strategies if you find yourself falling short.

Prioritize Self-Care

Academic success is closely tied to your overall well-being. Prioritize self-care by getting enough sleep, eating a balanced diet, and finding time for physical activity.

Mental health is equally important, so practice stress management techniques, such as mindfulness or relaxation exercises, to stay focused and calm under pressure.

Communicate with Your Advisors

Regularly check in with your academic advisors to ensure you’re on track with both your degree requirements and scholarship obligations.

They can provide valuable guidance on course selection, academic challenges, and career planning, helping you navigate your academic journey with confidence.

 

By staying committed to your studies and implementing these strategies, you can safeguard your scholarship and achieve academic excellence. And it looks great on your resume!

3. Communicate with Your Scholarship Provider

Keep an open line of communication with your scholarship provider. If you encounter any challenges that might affect your ability to meet the scholarship requirements, let them know as soon as possible. Many providers are willing to work with you if you show initiative and responsibility.

 

4. Renew Your Scholarship

Renewable scholarships can provide ongoing financial support throughout your academic journey, but they often require you to reapply or submit additional documentation each year. Staying on top of the renewal process is crucial to ensuring continued funding.

Track Deadlines

Missing a renewal deadline could mean losing your scholarship. Keep a calendar or set reminders for all renewal-related deadlines, including when applications open, when documents need to be submitted, and when the renewal process must be completed.

Staying organized and ahead of schedule can prevent last-minute stress and possible loss of funding. (By the way, Red Kite can help you do all of that!)

Submit Required Documents

Scholarships often require you to submit updated documents, such as transcripts, proof of enrollment, financial aid forms, or letters of recommendation.

Gather these documents well in advance and double-check that they meet the scholarship’s specific requirements. Submitting everything on time and in the correct format is essential to avoid delays or disqualification.

Write Renewal Essays

If your scholarship renewal process includes an essay, approach it with the same dedication you applied to your original application.

Reflect on your achievements over the past year, both academically and personally. Highlight how the scholarship has contributed to your success and how you’ve continued to meet or exceed the expectations set by the scholarship committee. Make your essay compelling, clear, and aligned with the values of the scholarship provider.

Keep Your GPA in Check

Maintaining a strong GPA is often a key requirement for renewing your scholarship. Continuously monitor your academic performance and seek help if you notice any areas where you’re struggling.

If your GPA dips, take proactive steps to improve it before the renewal period. Showing that you’ve taken initiative to overcome challenges can also be a positive point to include in your renewal essay.

Plan Ahead for Financial Aid

Even if your scholarship is renewable, it’s wise to have a backup plan in case something changes.

You can use Red Kite to explore other scholarship opportunities, apply for grants, or consider work-study options. Having a diversified financial aid strategy can provide security and peace of mind.

Stay Informed of Changes

Scholarship programs sometimes update their criteria or processes. Keep yourself informed about any changes by regularly checking the scholarship provider’s website or communications.

Staying updated will ensure you’re not caught off guard by new requirements or procedures.

5. Engage in Extracurricular Activities

While academics are crucial, scholarship providers also value well-rounded students. Engaging in extracurricular activities, community service, or leadership roles can demonstrate your commitment and may even be a requirement for keeping your financial aid package.

6. Monitor Your Progress

Regularly check your academic progress to ensure you’re meeting the scholarship requirements. Most schools provide online portals where you can track your GPA, credit hours, and other important metrics. If you see any red flags, take immediate action to address them.

7. Plan for the Unexpected

As we touched on before, life can be unpredictable, and you may face challenges that impact your academic performance. Whether it’s a personal issue, health problem, or financial difficulty, it’s important to have a plan in place.

  • Seek Support Services: Most colleges offer support services, such as counseling, academic advising, and financial aid offices, which can help you navigate difficult times.
  • Discuss Options: If you’re facing a significant challenge, discuss your options with your academic advisor or scholarship provider. They may offer solutions like taking a temporary leave of absence without losing your scholarship.

8. Stay Motivated

Finally, staying motivated is key to maintaining your scholarship. Remember why you applied for the scholarship in the first place while keeping your long-term goals in mind. Surround yourself with supportive friends, mentors, and resources that encourage you to succeed.

Keeping a scholarship requires diligence, responsibility, and a proactive approach. By understanding the requirements, staying on top of your academics, and engaging in extracurricular activities, you can maintain your scholarship and continue on the path to achieving your educational goals.

Remember, your scholarship is not just a financial award—it’s an investment in your future. Keep striving for excellence, and you’ll not only keep your scholarship, but also set yourself up for long-term success.

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5 Tips for Living in a Dorm

Coming home from an 8 p.m. class to a 200-square-foot dorm isn’t always a slay, especially if you’re sharing it with one or two other people.

Some college students have carpeted dorms, or an in-room sink, or hallway bathrooms. Whatever your dorm situation is, ya girl is here to share the things I wish I’d known before moving on campus.

I lived in the dorms for all four years (minus the little panny1 during my sophomore year). My private university required all of its students to live on campus, and juniors could apply and hope to get into one of the campus apartments for their senior year.

So, I know more than most students about how difficult dorming can be, although campus housing can also offer plenty of benefits. The short commute to class, neighbor friends, and campus security are all super helpful to fresh-out-of-high school kids who might be living on their own for the first time.

Let’s get into it!

1. Don’t pack too much.

I drove from Texas to California with everything I owned stuffed into a rental van. I had no idea what to expect, so I packed for every possibility. (I’m also a person with diagnosed anxiety, so I tend to overprepare rather than risk underpreparing.)

Imagine my surprise when I rolled up and saw – really saw – just how small my dorm room was. I ended up having to ship back two boxes of my things.

Remember that you can also buy what you need when you arrive to campus. Most out-of-state kids don’t have to worry about this problem, because they can only take one or two suitcases on the plane.

But for local kids and kids who drive from home, be sure to watch just how much you’re packing. “I need this sequin shirt in case there’s an 80s-themed party!” …no, bestie, you don’t. Besides, you’ll be home for winter break soon enough, so it’s better to air on the side of caution, see what you need, then grab it later.

A few of the things I ended up ditching were: my electric pencil sharpener, my scrapbooks, and my candles. You’re sharing your space with another person, and you don’t want to overcrowd them or yourself.

Plus, candles in a dorm are a fire hazard, which is why they’re usually against the rules… but you don’t need ten of them, anyway.

2. Invest in some earplugs.

I’ve had lifelong sleep issues, but even if you can sleep like a tank, you need earplugs. Nobody’s meant to sleep through a dance party above them, or a neighbor who plays the French horn, or a roommate who needs to listen to bubble ASMR in order to fall asleep.

Pretty universally, dorm walls are super thin. There are probably 100+ other people living in the same building, each with their own schedules and noisy habits. And trust, you’re gonna need that midday nap.

After a couple weeks in the dorm, I noticed that even during quiet hours, students coming and going in the middle of the night would wake me up. I could hear the front door slamming from the second floor.

So, I invested in some shotgun-grade earplugs, but even that wasn’t enough. It was also super annoying trying to study and being able to hear your neighbors’ every spoken word, and I didn’t feel like hiking to the library every time.

At the time, I had Beats headphones, which were super uncomfortable to sleep in, but I managed. These days, I default to my Airpods Pro or Airpods Max. Both have noise-cancelling capabilities, and while pricy, they definitely helped me out during my senior year. There are also plenty of cheaper alternatives that offer noise-cancelling, like the Beats Studio Buds for $79.99 (yes, that’s a link to the pink ones. You’re welcome).

Find ’em, wear ’em, and get some rest!

3. Communicate with your roommate.

We’ve all heard the nightmare dorm stories, but a foolproof strategy for avoiding conflict is to overcommunicate with your new roommate/roommates. Some people just have noncompatible personalities, but you can make each others’ lives easier by constantly staying in touch.

Tell them when you’re leaving the dorm, when you’re coming back, if you want to bring friends over, etc. This is also a great life skill to bring to your post-college life, when you’ll likely have to move into a shared apartment.

Of course, communicating is also the key to deepening your bond. There’s no better way to get to know someone than by living with them, so talking about your day with your roommate can feel like built-in therapy.

And if they’re doing something that bothers you, bring it up right away, but don’t come at the problem with hostility. “Hey, I really appreciate you, but I was wondering if we could do things differently.” You’re on the same team. You both want to have a nice, comfortable time in your dorm, so never approach issues with anything less than love.

The first two roommates I had weren’t great. The bottom line was that we didn’t trust each other, which made for a very unsafe-feeling living situation. You need to feel like your personal belongings are safe with your roommate, and that you are safe.

If there’s a creepy dude on your floor, walk your roommate to the bathroom and back (and, of course, tell your RA [Resident Assistant]). Have each other’s back, and maybe bring them a rice crispie every once in a while. Then you’ve automatically won their heart.

4. Clean up after yourself.

One of the most frustrating parts of living in a dorm is the mess. No matter what, you’ll run into kids who leave a mountain of dirty dishes in the community sink, or trash the lobby with their friends. I ended up washing my bowls in the bathroom sink because the dorm kitchen was that dirty.

And yet, one time, I walked downstairs and found a dirty-blonde girl scrubbing the counters like her life depended on it. “You’re cleaning?” I asked, holding my frozen nuggets in my hand.

“Yes,” she said, and looked at me with wide-eyed desperation. “I can’t take it anymore.”

So, I rolled up my sleeves and joined in. We didn’t stop until every inch of the kitchen had been wiped down, and every moldy dish had been tossed in the trash. I don’t even know her name, but that day, I met my soulmate.

Two days later, I found that somebody had already messed it all up again – they’d made some kind of baked good, and both the oven and the counters were sticky all over again.

You can’t depend on someone like me and that girl (if you’re reading this, I love you) to pick up after you. We’re all sharing the dorm space together, and it’s so important to pitch in and do your part.

Of course, there’s only so much you can do, so just try to clean your mess. If the bathroom is already filthy and you spill some makeup on the counter, wipe it up anyway. Little acts of upkeep can go a long way in a dorm.

5. Make friends with your RA.

Residential Assistants are hired by the university to make sure that everything in the dorms run smoothly. They handle roommate disputes, maintenance requests, and hundreds of eager freshmen with a million questions.

Usually, they’re college students themselves, and the school offers free housing in exchange for their services. So, just remember, even though they’re in charge of you, they understand exactly what you’re going through.

My parents always taught me to make friends with people who you want on your side – neighbors, coworkers, and Chipotle workers, to name a few. I don’t mean that you should befriend people with some kind of ulterior motive in mind, but if you have to see them all the time, you might as well introduce yourself.

It’s easy to ignore the people around you, or pretend like they don’t exist, but I promise you, taking the step to make extra friends will pay off. Get that extra scoop of guac!

The best way to make friends with your RA is by going to the dorm events they set up. My wonderful RA hosted a Thanksgiving get-together party in the lobby, where any resident of our hall was welcome to come and decorate turkey-shaped cookies.

I grabbed my roommate and a friend or two, then struck up a conversation with my RA. After I talked to him, he became less like this scary, parentlike figure, and more like a dude trying his best, same as any of us.

Connecting with your RA might also offer some unofficial benefits. My RA let me come study in his dorm whenever my roommate had company over, and even gave me his old textbook for one of his courses.

You really can’t go wrong, even just by being nice to them. They probably deal with a lot of crazy issues, and you can be a positive spot in their hard job.

So, now you have a basic foundation for approaching life in the dorm. It’s good that you’re doing some research so you know what you’re walking into, but just remember that everybody’s situation is different, especially when it comes to roommates. All you can do is approach people with openness and honesty, and then nobody can ever say that you didn’t try.

As I mentioned, I ran into a lot of problems during my own dorming experience. But if you’re required to be there, you might as well make the most of it. One of my favorite ways to cheer myself up in the dorms was by making food, and I perfected a lot of cheap and easy recipes during my time on campus. We’ll update this page with a link to some fun dorm recipes!

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ChatGPT Writes a “Funny” Scholarship Article, And It’s Bad

It’s summer, y’all, so we’re taking a break this week. I’m relaxing by the pool with my scholarship apps and my IZZE. So, I’m gonna pass the blog reigns to everybody’s newest best friend: ChatGPT.

The vibes I get when AI tries to be funny is probably how my 14-year-old cousin feels when I show her my Dobby from Harry Potter impression. It’s, like, sort of there, but not quite… and maybe it’s best left to the professionals, anyway.

But don’t get me wrong – I’m probably one of 3 people who are actually excited about AI. A tool that can instantly write fanfiction about Beyoncé adopting me into her family? One hundo P on board.

And I know that the more specific your prompt is, the better the delivered product, but I just went with a simple one to see what would happen. Spoiler alert: if AI is coming for my job, it ain’t anytime soon. *Sips IZZE*

Also, as a little treat, I also had an AI generate the photos for this blog. We’ll be analyzing those, too, because… well, you’ll see.

Just two besties hangin’ in college, vibing amongst the books melting off the wall, and… their faces. I have concerns about the faces.

Prompt: Write a funny yet informative article about scholarships. This will be for a company called Red Kite, which offers access to over $25 BILLION in financial aid opportunities.

 

How to Catch a Red Kite: A Humorous Guide to Scholarships

 

I’m sorry, but I can’t let her get away with this title. You don’t need to catch Red Kite, bestie. Red Kite is yours for the taking! The point of us offering access to financial aid is to make applying to scholarships easier.

Also, if you tell someone something’s funny, it’s… not. ChatGPT needs to remmeber the age-old writing rule: “show instead of telling.” The fact that we’re already starting out with “A Humorous Guide to Scholarships” is hurting my back.

 

Welcome, scholarship hunters!

 

😐Kitelings. Kitelings.

 

Have you ever tried catching a Red Kite? No, not the bird—I’m talking about the treasure trove of financial aid opportunities worth over $25 billion. Yes, BILLION with a ‘B’.

 

Another golden writing rule broken: you never start a piece of writing with a reference to the title, people. That’s like titling a blog “How to Candle” and the first sentence is, “Have you ever tried to candle?”

 

If you’re feeling like Scrooge McDuck diving into his vault, you’re not far off. So grab your butterfly nets, folks, because we’re about to embark on a whimsical journey through the wondrous world of scholarships, courtesy of your friendly financial aid experts at Red Kite.

 

Not Scrooge McDuck 😭😭😭What are we even talking about? Why is the metaphor “catching” scholarships? Even if “Red Kite” referred to the bird (which it does not), why is your first instinct to catch such a beautifully majestic creature?

And “a whimsical journey through the wondrous world of scholarships” is giving that one teacher who’s, like super pumped about chloroplasts at 8 AM on a Thursday. We just can’t relate.

Ah, sollmorif ‘at sholalisharpschiihp. The classic.

The Scholarship Safari

Imagine the scholarship hunt as a safari. Your terrain? The vast savannah of the internet. Your prey? Scholarships of all shapes and sizes. Some are majestic and elusive, like the rare “Full-Ride Rhinos,” while others are more common but still valuable, like the “Small-Grant Gazelles.” The key to a successful safari is knowing where to look and being prepared for anything.

 

My face after reading that:

I mean… I guess the spirit is there? But the whole metaphor of financial aid being an animal you need to hunt doesn’t align with our Red Kite mission. Scholarships are more like a tasty dessert that we want to bring to you on a plate!

Our goal is to make financial aid easier and less stressful, so you don’t have to feel like you’re in the middle of a crazy, scary jungle. We walk you through every step of the process, from applying to keeping track of deadlines, and we keep you informed so that you can make the smartest choices.

Sorry, I started taking over the blog, and I’m trying to tan, here… continue, please, Miss GPT.

 

First things first: pack your essentials. You’ll need:

  1. A killer application essay (think of it as your camouflage).
  2. Stellar grades (your binoculars to spot opportunities from afar).
  3. Extracurricular activities (your bait to lure the scholarship committee).

 

But where are the GIGGLES? Comparing grades to binoculars isn’t exactly open-mic material. Nobody’s laughing, girl.

 

The Species of Scholarships

There are many different types of scholarships in the wild. Here’s a quick field guide:

  1. Merit-Based Scholarships: These are the lions of the scholarship savannah, awarded based on your academic prowess, talents, or special skills. They’re majestic but competitive. Only the strongest applications survive.

 

Hmm… that last line is a little dramatic. Grades aren’t everything these days, as my own college scholarship proved. And while merit-based scholarships are definitely GPA-centered, it would be incorrect to say that only high-scoring students survive, just like the idea that you won’t automatically be eaten if you see a lion on a safari.

Me and my son, sittin’ by the wall of book-paper-shelf-posters, and… THE HANDS?
  1. Need-Based Scholarships: These gentle giants are awarded based on financial need. They’re like the elephants, supportive and available to those who need them most.
  2. Athletic Scholarships: The cheetahs of the bunch, these are for those who run faster, jump higher, or score more points. They require not just skill but also stamina and dedication.
  3. Creative Scholarships: These colorful peacocks are for the artists, musicians, and writers among us. Show off your creative plumage and dazzle the judges.
  4. Unusual Scholarships: The platypuses of the scholarship world. From left-handed scholarships to awards for duck-calling skills, these quirky scholarships prove that there’s something out there for everyone.

 

If anyone ever tells you to “show off your creative plumage,” your first call should be to the police. I gotta give the AI some credit here, because the metaphor is consistent and makes sense. And the safari is growing on me – especially with the next section – but I still think the whole idea’s rotten to the core.

The point of scholarships is to make college more affordable, whereas a safari is just an experience. For a lot of people, financial aid makes the difference on whether they can go to college or not. It’s important, so if we’re going with the “scholarships on a plate” thing I mentioned earlier, you might think of it like a restaurant that everybody needs to pass through while driving to college.

Even if you’re set on tuition for one year, scholarships don’t always roll over, and I know that my college costs increased by thousands of dollars each year. So you need to keep stopping by the Red Kite restaurant, where our waiters will take good care of you! (Don’t make it weird.)

 

The Red Kite Advantage

Now, why should you choose Red Kite as your safari guide? Simple. Red Kite is the seasoned ranger with the map to the biggest herd of scholarships. They offer access to over $25 billion in financial aid opportunities. That’s like having a GPS for your scholarship safari.

Here’s how Red Kite can transform your scholarship hunt:

  1. Personalized Matches: Red Kite uses sophisticated algorithms to match you with scholarships tailored to your unique profile. No more wandering aimlessly through the scholarship jungle.
  2. Comprehensive Database: With access to such a vast array of scholarships, Red Kite ensures you won’t miss out on any potential opportunities. It’s like having a treasure map with all the X marks.
  3. Application Assistance: Red Kite offers tips and resources to help you craft the perfect application. Think of it as having a guide to help you set the perfect trap for your scholarship prey.

 

Why are we hunting? Can’t we just take a selfie with a cheetah and leave? The idea of need-based scholarships as an elephant that needs to be trapped is depressing.

Y’all, an estimated $100 million in scholarship money is wasted every year. These organizations want to help you get the college funds you need. I don’t think any of these animals want to be caught and hauled out of the “scholarship savannah.”

 

Tips for a Successful Hunt

  1. Start Early: The early bird catches the worm, and the early applicant catches the scholarship. Don’t wait until the last minute to start your search.
  2. Stay Organized: Keep track of deadlines, requirements, and materials needed for each application. A good hunter always has their gear in order.

 

…Red Kite helps you keep track of your deadlines for you. Research, Miss GPT! Research!

 

  1. Tailor Your Applications: One size does not fit all. Customize your essays and applications to fit the specific scholarship criteria.
  2. Never Give Up: The scholarship hunt can be tough, but persistence pays off. Keep applying, and eventually, you’ll land your prize.

 

I guess that’s a good note to end on. The college application sphere is competitive, but there are billions of dollars worth of scholarships for the taking. Don’t get discouraged if you don’t land a scholarship right away.

Conclusion

So there you have it, scholarship hunters! With Red Kite as your guide, you’re well-equipped to navigate the wild and wonderful world of financial aid. Remember, the scholarship safari is not just about catching the big game but also about the thrill of the hunt. Happy hunting, and may your nets be full of scholarships!

m not gonna lie, she’s slaying. The books are made out of money?? Queen!

Apparently, AI is a big hunting afficionado, but overall, I’d give this blog post a solid F. Maybe an F-, because that Scrooge McDuck reference made me cringe out of my skull.

Anyways, I’ll be back next week, so don’t worry, my Kitelings. We’ll leave the AI to the Beyoncé fanfiction.

And as always, be sure to check out myredkite.com for all your scholarship needs! Over $25 billion in financial aid opportunities are waiting for you! As ChatGPT said: that’s “billion” with a “B!”

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First-Generation Financial Aid

In Part 1, Red Kite took an in-depth look at Lesley Bello’s identity as a first-generation college student. We explored her undergraduate journey, the unique challenges she faced, and how her background as a Mexican-American shaped her educational experience.

Now, as a graduate student, we’re interviewing Lesley on insights into her personal background, her academic interests, and the cultural dynamics of her immigrant family.

This week, we asked her to think back on another critical aspect of her college experience: the process of applying for financial aid. She shares her experiences navigating the complexities of the FAFSA application, various obstacles she encountered, and the support systems that helped her along the way.

How did your family prepare you to go to college? Did they help you navigate the application/financial aid process?
They did not prepare me, nor did they help me at all. They had no way to guide me, so I had to figure it out on my own. And going to college was kind of just expected of me.

 

How has your experience been similar or different to other first-gen students?
Almost all of my friends or mutuals had to deal with imposter syndrome,* financial issues, identity crises, and/or the enmeshment of our families. The only difference I noticed was in the severity of them. Many people had someone to help them in their immediate family – I think I was the only one who didn’t, or was struggling a bit more with that. It just looks different for everyone.

 

As a first-gen student, were there special resources available to you?
Yes. Thankfully, our university had a free program called Summer Bridge. They hosted incoming first-generation college students for a week and did a play-by-play of what college would entail; socially, academically, and professionally.

They also offered an additional class called STEP (Students Together Empowering Peers) that was a continuation of that summer program. This entailed first-gen mentorships, resources, etc.

There was also a BLP (Book Lending Program) that helped us with getting textbooks for courses. However, not many people knew of any of these programs, and so many people fell through the cracks. They did not have the support they could have had.

 

Were there first-gen clubs, Mexican culture classes, etc available to you on campus?
Aside from STEP, there was a First-Gen Family Club, but I wasn’t involved in it, because it was just student-led and made. I know we did have events here and there for Hispanic/Latino Heritage Month and stuff like that – things that involved all cultures. But nothing to help guide us through the financial sphere specifically.

Our university had all of its first-generation students stand at graduation (I think it was something like 30% of our class). How did that make you feel? Were you proud, embarrassed, or a mix?
Honestly, at that point in my college journey, I was so over it, I didn’t care a lot. So I guess it was a mix. They profited off of us so much, and they just did that so the university looked good. But they didn’t do it because they cared for us – they did it for THEM. The school always states that they are a Hispanic-serving institution, but they didn’t financially help us or offer other financial support or resources.

 

Did you have a college counselor? How did that benefit you or frustrate you?
I had several different college counselors. It wasn’t until my senior year that I had a solid college counselor who helped me navigate the last year and now grad school. Before him, it was just frustrating because no one would be helpful at all and once again, I had to figure it out on my own.

 

What did you wish you had known before applying to college?

I wish I had known how to take care of my mental health. Resources for how to cope with the stress. So many expectations, so many goals, pressures from other people… that just drained me. That’s the one thing I wish I’d known before.

 

Now that you’re a grad student, are you living on-campus?
Yes, in graduate housing apartments.

 

Are you working?
Yes, 3 jobs.

How was applying to graduate school different than undergrad?
I was in a preliminary teaching credential and Master’s program before I went into the program that I am now in (Master’s in Clinical Mental Health Counseling). The process was actually not that bad. Since it was the same school, I just had to change programs I was in. Definitely not as stressful as other programs, but this
was the only program I applied to, so it was a make-or-break thing.

 

How is your brother experiencing being first-gen?
My younger sibling is studying Computer Science. He is also a first-generation college student, but despite me going through the process first, he still has to deal with a lot of what I did as a first-generation student. The public school system is different than a private school, and the education/financial aid system is changing yearly.

 

Did you receive any scholarships or financial aid? If so, please tell me what that process was like, how much you received, etc.

The process of getting financial aid through the school was okay. My tuition was paid off completely – I just had to pay the difference, because it increased every year. I only attended this school because of that, especially because it is a private school.

Without the financial aid, I would not have been able to afford it. During high school and my undergrad years, I received scholarships that would then cover my tuition difference and make it more manageable. Receiving these helped so much. The only thing I had to pay for was my housing.

 

Red Kite helps connect students to scholarships so that they can avoid falling into educational debt. Do you have any debt?

No, I don’t have any debt. But I wish I had known about them before. It would’ve been so much easier.

 

What difficulties did you have with the FAFSA?
This process was so, so incredibly difficult. I almost didn’t receive any FAFSA, because I could not finish my application my first year. Because my parents did not have a social security number, I had to fill out the application differently, since they couldn’t sign it.

I had to print it out and MAIL it to them. I HAD TO DO THAT EVERY YEAR. But the first year I applied I did not know that. AND NO ONE KNEW WHAT TO DO. Not even my AVID (Advancement Via Individual Determination) teachers!

Thinking about it now, years later, I don’t know why they couldn’t help me. I don’t know how they never got a student with parents like mine. I remember that as a high school senior I would spend my days stressed out and worried about how I would pay for school. We couldn’t afford it. A family friend mentioned opening up a GoFundMe for me, but I was embarrassed and said no.

I was determined to figure it out, and eventually I did. But every year something was always wrong. I always had to speak to someone to help me with my application. Most people ask their parents or family members, but I couldn’t. I had to figure it out on my own. Even now as a grad student, I still struggle.

Lesley’s story exemplifies the resilience and determination that many first-gen students embody. Despite facing a multitude of challenges – from navigating the complex financial aid process without familial guidance, to dealing with the emotional toll of imposter syndrome – Lesley persevered and found the crucial support she needed.

Her experiences also sheds light on the systemic issues within higher education that can hinder the success of first-gen students. Insufficient institutional support is the biggest contributor to why some first-gen students fail to graduate college. Yet, some universities also highlight the power of community and the importance of resources specifically tailored for first-gen students.

As Lesley continues her academic journey in graduate school, resources like Red Kite are dedicated to minimizing the cost of college. But private institutions must do more than simply acknowledge the presence of first-gen students and capitalize off of that population for diversity purposes.

Colleges must actively provide comprehensive support to ensure first-gen success. As Lesley’s story shows, the triumphs of overcoming such obstacles are profound and deeply impactful.

Lesley is the most hard-working person I know, and I am honored to call her my closest friend. I only hope that this article series captured part of this first-gen powerhouse.

 

* ”Imposter syndrome” is defined as “the persistent inability to believe that one’s success is deserved or has been legitimately achieved as a result of one’s own effort or skills.”

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10 Tips for Writing Your College Essay

By Jane Cooper

Welcome back! This is a continuation of my Essay Analysis blog series. Last time around, we took an in-depth look at my personal college essay. I highlighted the strategies I used, why they worked, and how they could’ve been stronger. My essay won me a cumulative $406,000 in scholarships (💅).

I wanted to put together a list of highlights from that analysis in order to form a general article of things to keep in mind while writing your own personal college essay. This is part one of two, so there’s more tips to come!

And I know that your brain is bursting from information overload at this point – there’s so many stressful variables to encounter while applying to college. For this reason, I chose to break up this article with cute photos of my cat. Her government name is Mrs. Kisses, but you can address her as Her Majesty The Queen Sovereign.

Let’s hit the highlights!

1. You are selling the idea of yourself.

This is the number one thing to keep in mind. Everybody’s a marketing major in their college essay, but the good news is that you’ve got the easiest thing in the world to sell: you!

And of course, we’ve all seen those scammy ads where somebody’s trying to convince you that you can get paid to play mobile games. So when you’re selling yourself, you don’t want to come off as dishonest or otherwise shady. That’s why the other nonnegotiable strategy for your essay is:

 

2. Tell the truth.

Mom Jane is stepping in for a sec to tell you this: if you go through life honestly, you’ll have nothing to reproach yourself about, even if the worst comes to pass.

For example, when it comes to your college essay, you might feel the urge to stretch the truth and say that you’ve got more experience than you actually have. Because when you’re the product that you’re trying to sell, you’ll naturally want to gas yourself up.

But you must remember that admissions staff sit at their desks and read hundreds of college essays. They know that you’re not superhuman, so if you pretend that’s the case, they’ll know you’re being dishonest.

Now, this is the key: you need to be honest, but don’t overshare. We’ll cover this a bit more in my “anti-pity-party” bullet point (#13 in part 2), but if you waltz in like, “I have no idea what I’m doing, but I really want to join your college!”… that’s a strike against yourself (or an “ick”).

Because you do know what you’re doing, whether you believe that or not. You’ve had 12 years of school to prepare yourself for college. Be confident, and be genuine!

3. Talk to them like people.

I know you’ve written a research essay where you feel like you’re speaking to a robot. “The American Civil War took place in the 6th decade of the 19th century.” (Yes, I had to Google that.)

You’re trying to meet word counts; you’re bored to tears; you hate writing essays. And I know this because even I hate writing essays, even though I’m an English Major who reads a book a week (and obviously writes blogs for a living). The difference is in the passion. I’m passionate about your success, not the Civil War, so let me give you a surefire way into admission: write to a human, because you are.

There is a real person reading this college essay that you’re writing. And they’re not this scary decision-maker who holds your future in your hands, either, even though it feels that way! It’s some caffeine-addicted employee who’s looking at your essay in between twenty others, and you know what they’ll appreciate? Your honesty and consideration.

“PLEASE LET ME INTO YOUR PROGRAM BESTIE I’M SO COOL AND I KNOW YOU’RE SO SMART-” let me stop you right there, because that’s not what I meant. There’s a way to be both professional and thoughtful. All the best bosses are like that: they know how to get stuff done, and they’re also considerate of their employees.

So when you’re writing with the person in the admissions office in mind, you want to be that boss. You’re respectful of your reader’s time while also being firmly confident in yourself and your accomplishments. “This is a good product, and you want this product at your school.”

4. Hook ’em like a fish.

That all being said, it’s time to capture the admission office’s attention. And you can’t do that with the ole “When I was in first grade, I decided to become a doctor.” Be bold! Slap them in the face! (Metaphorically, of course…) Take the best line in your essay, and stick it right at the top.

And because this is a personal essay, I can’t give you an exact formula for a compelling opening, because that’ll be specific to you. Your hook sets up the rest of your essay, so it has to be relevant and encompassing. By that, I mean that you can’t just say: “I murdered three people. Just kidding! Here are five reasons why I want to study birds in college.”

Let’s go back to the first line of my own essay as an example. Not to say that this is the greatest opener in the history of time and space, but objectively, there’s a lot to unpack here:

 

While I was creating each of my novels, I had to think to myself, “how do I make people who don’t know me care about my work, even if they have no reason to?”

 

This is about my accomplishments (my novels), my anxieties (how, even if they have no reason to?), my goals (to make people care), my passion (I had to think to myself), and my purpose (writing)… all wrapped into one sentence.

Now, that’s a pretty ambitious task to ask of any 17-year-old, even one with a lot of writing experience. So I’ll just say this – the best hooks in any piece of writing have to be:

  • Engaging
  • Condensed (no word salad or filler)
  • Comprehensive
  • Unique and personal (there you are, you beautiful individual!)

 

I’ll give you another example of a fantastic essay hook I’ve seen, so you don’t just have my (random Southern gal) first line for your strategy:

 

From “Threatened By ISIS” by an anonymous author:

In 8th grade while doing a school project I Googled my dad’s name and it came up in US military documents posted on the Snowden/NSA documents on WikiLeaks.

 

Me after reading that:

Now, because this is an anonymous author, I couldn’t find out whether or not this was actually written by a real college student for a real college essay. You gotta verify your sources, people!

Regardless, I don’t care: that’s a punch in the gut right there, baby! That line crams in so much information. After reading that first line, you want to keep reading, and that’s the key.

5. Craft your essay around your goal.

Alright, my Kitelings. You’ve got your strategy, and you’re brainstorming an opening hook that’s so strong, it’ll knock me out of my cubicle. What next? Your outline, of course! (Unless you’re a pantser, like me, in which case your outline becomes part of your internal process. But you need an outline regardless. 🤪)

What school are you applying to? What major do you have in mind? If you don’t have an answer to either of these questions, that’s totally fine, which I expand further upon in #9. But even if you’re writing a general Common App essay, a personal paper can get sidetracked if it doesn’t have an end goal.

Part of having confidence in your essay is having direction. Your essay is about how much you want to get into college, point blank period, and it’s also about why. Who are you? Why are you at my doorstep? And why should I let you in – to college, specifically?

And now, for those of you that do have a direction, your end goal needs to be more refined and clear, whether it be about your passion for theater, AI technology, business management, or birds.¹ I think I about covered all the existing majors right there.

Anyways, your essay needs to be not only about why you deserve to go to college, but also about how you’ll be an asset to your field. Where did your passion come from, and what steps have you made towards pursuing it?

6. You are you, and nobody else.

Here’s the biggest advantage you have over your fellow applicants. It’s time to capitalize off your individuality and emphasize your uniqueness. This is not along the vein of “I’m so quirky and different”, but more so about how you being you will benefit your college.

And you don’t have to put down your competition, either. Being yourself is enough, as cheesy as it sounds – why waste words on why you’re better than everybody else? That’s not the team-player mentality that admissions offices are looking for, because college is not about competing (I’m obviously not referring to sports, clubs, or betting your bestie that you can eat more mini Doritos than her). Everybody in your class can get an A.

Also, you want to be specific about your you-ness. You’ve got distinctive qualities that come together to paint a vivid picture of your gorgeous ethic. So none of that “I am a very nice person :)”, and you don’t even want to jazz it up: “I have often been regarded as possessing a most amiable disposition.” You want to indirectly brag about how great you are via the age-old writing rule: “Don’t tell it to us, show it to us.”

That is not to say that you can’t be confident – remember how my own essay ended with “I know my future is full of greatness”? (By the way, I was fully convinced otherwise, but I faked it ’til I made it!) But I felt like the rest of my essay had set itself up to earn that line by showing my capabilities.

7. You don’t have to start from the very beginning.

As I mentioned in the analysis of my own essay, the overwhelming majority of applicants will structure their college essay in chronological order. Now, this isn’t a dealbreaker; maybe when you were born, you had 10 legs, and that’s why you wanna study squids, or something. I don’t know. But seriously, if you want to be different, throw your audience right into the excitement!

Remember our friend who Googled his father’s name and Wikileaks came up? That’s the good stuff, and it came from a memory in 8th grade. If you’re trying to meet the word count by describing the plants that grew on your childhood lawn (unless, of course, you’re a botany major), the admissions office will smell that kind of filler from a mile away.

What’s the most impactful thing that’s ever happened to you? How did it shape the person you are today, and how did it affect your decision to go to college? Don’t reach for it – there should be a clear line between that event and your college career. So if one memory doesn’t work, try something else. Then after that, you can go back – or jump forward – to another relevant period of your life. Play around with time in your essay. Passion is nonlinear, so why should your essay be?

 

8. Keep your audience invested in the idea of your success.

By highlighting your uniqueness, you’re now well on your way to convincing your audience to care about you. You need your reader to be invested in you and your success, and thereby, you must keep them interested.

College campuses are made up of open-minded individuals who have worked hard to get there. Prove that you can fit in to a community like that by explaining why you deserve to succeed, and how that success can only be achieved through college.

9. It’s okay if you don’t have everything figured out.

Breathe! If you’ve got no idea what you’re doing or where you’re going, and all you know is that you want to go to college, you’re not alone. It’s a big ask to have anyone decide which direction to take their future in, let alone a high schooler (or even a grad student… heyyyyy).

Being undecided can be a strength, because it means you’re open and flexible. College is about evolving minds and preparing people for a bright future, and it may take you a while longer to discover what you’re interested in. One common denominator of all successful applicants is that they’re hard working.

Show the admissions office that whatever direction you’ll be going in, you’ll work hard at it. The best way to do that? ↓↓↓↓↓

 

10. Be committed and responsible.

Clearly, the common denominator of all of these strategies is that regardless of who you are and what you want to study, you want to write about your commitment.

Whether it’s taking care of your siblings, volunteering at a local animal shelter, or working at the mall to pay for your car, your life is your responsibility.

Let’s be honest, nothing screams “college-ready” than being a little all over the place, but you made it this far, and that’s more than a lot of people can say. (I mean, you read a whole blog alternating between scarily-philosophical advice, cat photos, and bird-related tangents, and that’s something to be proud of in itself.)

In Texas, 1 of every 5 students fail to graduate, so in the words of my guru Kris Jenner:

When you’re writing your essay, it’s crucial to show that you take your commitments seriously and that you can be trusted to handle the challenges that come with higher education. After all, college isn’t just about hitting the books—it’s about managing your time, your tasks, and occasionally, the tendency to binge-watch 4 seasons of Ted Lasso.

The point is, you are more than just bullet points on a resume—you are a story, and a story is made up of characters. (I am not about to say that this essay is your main character moment, although it’s on the tip of my tongue). Your true self is enough to get you into college. Now you’ve just got to sell it.

Here you’ve got a few key strategies to keep in mind for your application. Your future college self will thank you for it—probably while juggling three Hydro Flasks of coffee, your laptop, and an overflowing laundry basket.

I say this at the end of part 2, but just remember, the only tip you need for your college essay is to believe in yourself. That goes for life, too!

 

 

¹”Birds” will be Mrs. Kisses’s major – of course, she decided to attend higher ed after finding a scholarship on Red Kite! Right now, she’s only two years old.

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My Experience Being a First-Generation College Student

Kite Writer Jane Cooper interviews Lesley Ann Bello, a first-generation college student who balances working three jobs with attending graduate school. This is part one of two.

A Love Letter to Lesley Ann

There’s someone out in California who knows what I ate for breakfast this morning. She’s on her way to class in her heather-gray Nissan, blasting the new Zayn album at top volume.

As a grad student working three jobs, her schedule’s pretty packed, but she still manages to find time to drive 20 miles to visit her mom in Fontana. She also bakes – blondies and brownies are her specialty.

Lesley Ann Bello and I met in a Class of 2023 group chat that was created the summer before our freshman year. And when the COVID-19 pandemic hit when we were sophomores, our online friendship was solidified.

As seniors, we roomed together in the dorms – our University requires its undergraduates to live on-campus for all 4 years – and we often talk about that year as if we spent it abroad in Paris, instead of a 200-square-foot closet.

“If only we could go back,” I texted one day.

“Going to call the University and ask them to rent the dorm out to us for 10 years,” she responded.

I wanted to sit down and interview her about what it was like to be a first-generation student at our university. Neither of Lesley’s parents attended college, and coming from a Mexican immigrant family, she faced struggles and pressures unique only to first-gens.

In Part 2 of this article, we explore her experience applying to scholarships and financial aid, including FAFSA difficulty, her transition into graduate school, and the college application process that left her with little guidance.

For now, let’s get to know Lesley Ann Bello, the hardest worker I know.

“Ann is not my middle name,” she clarifies. “I have two first names and one last name. Lesley Ann… Bello.”

 

Introduction

Where are you from?
I’m from San Bernadino, California.

 

Where are your parents from?
My parents are from Veracruz, Mexico.

 

When did they move to the US?
In 1998, so about 26 years ago.

 

How many siblings did your parents have?
My mom had four siblings, and my dad had 7.

 

Did your parents attend college?
They did not attend college. My mom has a middle school education level, and my dad has a high school education level. However, in Mexico they have their version of a vocational/trade school, and my mom received an informational secretary education. My dad graduated high school on track to be an engineer.

 

How many siblings do you have? Are they in college?
I have a younger brother (19), who is studying Computer Science at a Californian university.

 

What degree(s) did you graduate with?
I graduated with a BA in Psychology and a minor in Studio Art.

The First-Generation Experience

What does it mean to you to be a first-generation college student? How has that affected your time in college?
I realized early on that I had to stand up for myself, because no one else would; especially in the education system that sets POC (people of color) up to fail. Being first-gen means being an advocate for both myself and those coming after me. I want to set an example that we are not just a statistic – we can do this, and we will be something in life.

First-gens are not just numbers or faces on a brochure. We have something to give to this world. It means we need to work harder than others, because we don’t have things handed to us. During college, this made me question if I could really do it. But I knew my family was relying on me to set the example for my younger brother and our family friends.

 

How closely is your culture tied to your identity?
This is something that I have been thinking about a lot more as an adult. It has taken me a long time to be comfortable with who I am and where I come from. Growing up, I would say my culture was not tied to my identity. If anything, I tried to stay away from my culture. I didn’t really want to be associated with that. I hated my brown, tan skin.

I didn’t want to engage/participate in Mexican related activities. Like being in Folklorico dance classes, or wearing Mexican-related attire. I don’t know where that came from, because I grew up in a primarily Hispanic-dominant town. I didn’t have many white friends or relationships. But being Mexican-American was all I knew.

Now, as an adult, I try really hard to incorporate it into my life and my identity. I take pride in my culture. Not many people can say that their Mexican parents made a life of their own here, all by themselves. So this is a mixed-feelings response.

 

What struggles did you have because you’re a first-gen college student?
I had no support system that could help or guide me when navigating college, both as an undergraduate and now as a grad student. I relied heavily on the support system I created on campus. Without that, I would have probably dropped out.

I would not be who I am today without my mentors, who helped me tremendously – and still do. They assisted me with so much – doing professional interviews, helping me with applications, etc. I didn’t know how to do any of that. I didn’t even know what to expect, and they prepared me for that. None of my family or family friends have attended college, so I was/am on my own for the majority of this journey.

Privilege was something I did not have to witness until I attended college and was exposed to different things. As the oldest in a Mexican household, I did everything on my own. I had to become independent very early on. But to see other students with so much privilege was astonishing.

I had to remind people so often that things were different for me; that I couldn’t do everything they did. I didn’t have the financial stability many had. Having to explain that was so difficult and repetitive. It was annoying. It made me frustrated with who I was, and why this had to be my life. I wanted what other people had, and it was a feeling that stuck with me for so long.

I also still had the responsibility of my family, even if I was living on campus. I was still tied to my parents. Most of the time, I had to be the parent. Not everyone understood that. Eventually I realized this was called imposter syndrome, which is something common among many first-gen students.

Did you work during college? How difficult was it to find the balance between school,

family, and work?
Yes. I started off with one job during college, but then ended up with 2 jobs during my junior year all the way until I graduated. I definitely struggled more than I would like to say with balancing work, school, and family. No one taught me how to have a balance, so it was unhealthy.

I still am learning how to have a healthy balance. I had a lot of sleepless nights, because I didn’t prioritize and I procrastinated a lot. I definitely used work as an excuse as to why I would fall behind, when all I needed was better organizational and scheduling skills.

 

What does your family think about you going to college? How do they support you or
make things more difficult?
Oof. I think my mom is proud – she doesn’t really say that, so I will speak for her. However, she is supportive in her own ways. It has taken me a while to realize that. My brother is in school, so he knows that education is important. I hope this makes him go to graduate school as well. However, they sometimes do make this journey difficult.

Boundaries is something they struggle with, so it makes it hard to concentrate on school when I also need to be present with family. My dad views this as just me going to school so I can receive a bigger check when I start my career. He doesn’t realize that I am in this to help other people and to assist those who need it. That’s the major difference in the support I get from my parents. My mom understands the importance of what I want to do, but my dad doesn’t.

 

Do you feel that some universities capitalize off of their first-generation students for marketing/diversity purposes?
It is so frustrating. Like, yes, it’s great that we get exposure, but also… not. Half the time, it isn’t even that diverse – it’s just a lie. The funny part is that when the photographers are around, they go looking for the POC first-gen kids. It’s like they can smell you. We would always stay away from them.

 

What elements of your culture did you bring to school?
My mom’s cooking. Almost everyone would eat it or know about it. It was nice to have that aspect of my culture on campus. Especially seeing my friends eat it, or when I would bring them home. I would also teach some friends certain sayings in Spanish. Sometimes our cultures would overlap, or they would be curious and I would teach them something about my traditions. That was always fun.

 

Is there anything else you’ve learned from your experiences and/or from other
first-generation students?
Having a support system and community is so important, and I am so thankful for mine. Without this, I would not have survived college. I have learned that being first-gen can mean many different things, and that we need to come together rather than trying to be better than each other. All we really want is to belong and, to feel wanted, heard, and welcomed. We are stronger and bigger than what people think.

 

Stay tuned for Part 2, in which we explore Lesley’s perspective on the first-generation financial aid process.

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8 Goofy Scholarships

Bestie gang, it’s summer season, which means my brain has officially left the building. But the scholarship grind doesn’t stop!

I’m on the waitlist for grad school, doing research for Red Kite, and figuring out how to budget. Surprise, surprise: the world is expensive these days.

But this is the absolute best time to start applying to scholarships. We all need to go into our next year of school with a little extra cash, so I’ve complied a list of some fun, easy scholarships that made me giggle.

If you’re reading this after June, be sure to check to see if these scholarships are annual/recurring, because there’s always a chance of applying next time. And get this: some of them are open to high school students, too!

 

1. Ice Cream Scholarship – $1,500

Link: https://myredkite.com/finaid/flavor-of-the-month-scholarship

Y’all know that this scholarship had to be my #1. Also, July is apparently National Ice Cream Month, as if that isn’t every month… Anyways, say hello to the Flavor of the Month Scholarship!

Now, when I first came across this scholarship, I assumed that they wanted me to create a new type of ice cream, which felt a little daunting. Baskin-Robins has 31… like, how many more can there be? Turns out, it’s even easier than that!

All you have to do is write about your favorite flavor, and why it reflects your personality. $1500 to ramble about my obsession with birthday cake ice cream? Say less. (Is it because my love language is gift giving?)

Deadline: July 31

Age requirement: 14+

2. Zombie Apocalypse Scholarship – $2,000

Link: https://myredkite.com/finaid/zombie-apocalypse-scholarship

Picture me waking up in bed, gasping for air. Immediate call to the boyfriend.

“What happened?” he asked.

“I had a dream,” I said, breathless. “I was in the dorms, and the lights went out, and then zombies came in through the windows, and-”

“Jane, it’s 6 AM.”

True story. And now, here’s an opportunity to yap for cash. All you have to do is imagine what would happen to your school or college if zombies suddenly started running amok. Class is cancelled: the apocalypse is here, and people want to hear your survival plan!

P.S. If there’s a Target near your campus, you’re set. And you’ve got cute succulents.

Deadline: October 31

Age requirement: 14+

Me.

3. Taylor Swift Scholarship – $1,989

Link: https://myredkite.com/finaid/1989-taylors-version

I’ve mentioned Beyonce in almost every blog post on this website, but I’ve gotta look out for my Swifties, too!

This scholarship offers funds to one diehard fan that writes 400-600 words about a song from Taylor Swift’s album “1989 (Taylor’s Version).” I literally wrote a 30-page journal entry after Cowboy Carter dropped, so if y’all are anything like me, I know you’ll knock this one out of the park.

Deadline: July 1

Education level: Any

4. Comedian Scholarship – $1,500

Link: https://myredkite.com/finaid/make-me-laugh-scholarship

The Make Me Laugh Scholarship is targeted at anyone who’s got a funny story to share. Even if you can’t think of anything that happened to you personally, maybe your friends or family can come in clutch!

I used to work in a suit store, and one time, I was helping a Spanish-speaking customer find a new shirt. I wanted to tell him that he needed a bigger collar size, right? Unfortunately, my Spanish brain chose that exact moment to exit the building, and this is what I told a real person directly to his face: “Your neck is upstairs.”

Now, that horrifying moment no longer has to live just in my mind! (I facepalm at least twice a day over it.) This is your chance to put your standup-worthy moments onto paper.

Deadline: August 31

Age Requirement: 14+

5. Potato Scholarship – $10,000

Link: https://myredkite.com/finaid/potato-industry-scholarship

If you’re still considering which graduate path to pursue, consider this: potato.

I had to throw this one in for my fellow grad students. First of all, I had no idea The National Potato Council was even a thing. Second of all, based on the amount of Jack-in-the-Box curly fries I eat every week, how do I run for chairwoman?

They’re offering an annual scholarship to a grad student “conducting research for the benefit of the potato industry.” I mean, this is an industry that everybody’s passionate about, people.

Deadline: June 14

Age requirement: Graduate student

6. Rodeo Scholarship – $500

Link: https://myredkite.com/finaid/rodeo-ticket-student-scholarship

Yeehaw! Whether you grew up in the rodeo life or you’ve only ever been to one rodeo, all you have to do is write a short essay breaking down your experience.

Saddle up, partners, because the Rodeo Ticket Scholarship wants to hear from you. Did you try to ride a bull and realize you should probably stick to mechanical ones at the county fair? Did you fall in love with a cowboy from afar and write 3 follow-up journal entries about him? (Just me? Okay…)

Apart from the obvious $500 to help with college expenses, this scholarship is a fantastic opportunity to share your unique rodeo story with a wider audience. At the Texas Rodeo, I ate a table-sized turkey leg off the bone and got to pet some alpacas. There’s no easier way to this ole Southern gal’s heart than that. Time to dust off your boots and get to work!

Deadline: August 15

Age requirement: College-enrolled

7. Scholarship for Sewers/Knitters/Crocheters/Felters/Designers

Link: https://myredkite.com/finaid/national-make-it-with-wool

Ever dreamt of weaving your way to the top? (Sorry.) The National Make It With Wool competition is held annually by the American Sheep Industry.

And this is serious business, besties. There are several divisions – including college students – and most US States have their own local competition. So, the deadlines and cash prizes vary, but if you’re a designer that can work with wool, this one’s for you!

Do I run to my mom every time a button falls off my pants? Maybe. But I’m sure we’ve got some crafty Kitelings in need of funds for their wool-based passion.

8. Science Fiction/Fantasy Art Scholarship – $5,000

Link: https://myredkite.com/finaid/l-ron-hubbard-s-illustrators-of-the-future-contes

And for my amateur artists that dabble in sketching dragons and spaceships, you could win $500 for the Illustrators of the Future quarterly contest. After that, you’re automatically enrolled in their grand prize contest, with a first-place award of $5,000… rich.

But the best part is that you get to have your art judged by professional artists. This is the ultimate opportunity to make a name for yourself within the highly-competitive art industry! I mean, I’m already making fanart of Legolas from The Lord of the Rings in my spare time anyway, so why not get paid for it? (I’m kidding – your work needs to be original. Not about the Legolas part. That’s very meaningful to me.)

Deadline: June 30, 2024

Age requirement: Any

So there’s a few fun, goofy scholarships to kick off your summer 2024 search. While you’re here, be sure to submit your scholarship-winning essays to our Essay Analysis blog series.

And for more about Red Kite’s $25 BILLION in financial aid opportunities, you can sign up to our site (www.myredkite.com).

Follow our socials for more Jane content! I’m off to write about some zombies, and I hope to see you there!

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